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Crystal-Lulabeth

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  • Aug 10
  • France
  • Deviant for 10 years
  • She / Her
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My Bio
Hello!~
This is Crystal and Lulabeth and were both addicted in drawing XD
Wish to be a Good Artist Everyone!

Favourite Visual Artist
anyone O_O
Favourite Movies
Hansel and Gretel the witch hunters
Favourite TV Shows
Grimm
Favourite Bands / Musical Artists
Imagine Dragons / Katy Perry
Favourite Books
Golden quotes volume 1 - 3
Favourite Writers
Geoffrey Moss
Favourite Games
Resident Evil 2
Favourite Gaming Platform
none of your bussines
Other Interests
mlp....

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Thx for Useing my Collab ^ ^
hi there! i love your art! ^_^
hmm? *sorry for late reply* Im flattered but i think your art is more better than mine... I love your artwork too :heart:
Hey, I'm back!

Thank you for the fave on Surrender~!

Any particular reason as to why you liked it?
I like to know so I can continue to please you and 
others with my writing!

Thanks again!   Natsuki Shinomiya (Super hug) [V1] 
Haha, I love you~  *brotherly way*
  I liked your writing because, you use your brain, Some people just begins without seeing the future results, somehow, not using your brain well causes to bad results, but if you use it wisely, it all end to good results!
 
Continue being yourself~ We love you *brotherly way*

Note: watch every word you put in your story, you'll do great~


Welcome By the way hon~
Thank you for the fave on Puppet Strings~! 

Would you mind telling me what it was you liked about it?
I like to know so I can improve my writing skills and include the bits and pieces that you enjoyed into my next story!

Thanks again~!    :icongeritahug1plz:
If you really want to know:
      I found your work, Well-detailed. Mostly when that doll went through my nerves, but not enough to give me shivers of any kind. I kind of like it when i reached the bottom, want to know why?, well, it's because of the fact that I really caught the moment of realization that...Wait no. Actually, the part only when Author-chan made a mistake was that some parts were, low-detailed.

    You know, If you could Go like this scary~

  As I walked in the normal night, a cold breeze splashed gently through my cheeks, As i walked alone in a lonely road, I could have sworn I heard laughing. I came across a tree that i didn't knew existed in front of the road, 'Huh, so this is why no one takes this road' I thought as I walked beside the tree, I didn't notice anything weird than a tree on the road so to speak , I almost passed the tree when-  *rustle* *rustle*, I didn't even turned to my side to look at what's making the sound, thinking it was only the breeze, *rustle* Ignored *rustle rustle* Still Ignored, Almost away from the tree "Bella~", my head shot up and I quickly turned to see what or who was calling me, as I turned to see the object or person, I only found the tree still there, 'Huh? I-I thought I?...' My mind was bombard with questions, I only shook my head and try to calm myself, I turned to my front only to find a doll laying on the floor with a knife, all-bloody, the blood in my face went cold, I stared at the doll, eyes widen as I thought, 'This looks like it's wearing an Italian uniform...' my mind was again filled with questions- then went blank, as I noticed it's right arm stretched to my direction and pulled itself, then the left arm mimicked it's action, it was crawling to me slowly, I backed away only to make it crawl faster, It wore a smile that sent millions of shivers through my spine, I turned around and tried to run away, only to hit the tree trunk, my breathing hitched as I felt two arms snakes their way around my waist, "You're Mine Bella~" a voice with an accent sang through my ears, I quickly  turned around ready to face who it was but luckily...No one, my heart started to beat like a drum being abused by a rock star. I turned around to face the tree, only to find it gone, "w-what?" I stuttered, I turned around again to go back ome and call it a day, it was stressful anyway but as I did, I only found the doll ready to stab me as I let out an ear piercing shriek.
  
   My eyes shot open as i found my self in by bed, recognizing the scent, I was back inside my room,I thought I only dreamed about those things, 'but how-' I thought as I turned around only to find something that took my soul away, 'T-the doll!', it was there, on my side, all-bloody with the same knife on it's side, "Bella~" I froze, 'the doll just spoke' It held it's knife and was about to stabbed but said first

"It wasn't a dream. And now your MINE alone~"

You can try and use this idea and continue the story, try adding more thrilling details (I mean, Who wouldn't freak out waking and finding a bloody doll on their side~no?) 

   And last, Your a good writer, if this will make you better then, Your an Amazing Author-kun to me~ Love you~ *In a brotherly way of course*